Rationale Revised

My rationale is still developing, but here it is the jist of it as it stands so far:

I am designing a observation unit for remote viewing & the collection of information. I am designing it for people who have a compulsion for recording everything they see. The object is a critique of people having access of watching the world , the implications of it & if the user would develop a bond with the content.

I think it's sounding pretty good!